Comic 11 - Issue #1 Page 10

19th May 2016, 7:56 PM in HOTWAB 1
Issue #1 Page 10
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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Shaneoid 8th Jul 2016, 10:07 AM edit delete
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So... guess who studied Nietzsche at University. Guess who has dipped his toe in to Lovecraftian Cosmology? Again, I hope to take these concepts in different ways with HOTWAB.













Comments:

MistakeNPotatoes 20th May 2016, 6:50 PM edit delete reply
MistakeNPotatoes
This guy... reads Nietzsche.
Shaneoid 20th May 2016, 7:07 PM edit delete reply
Shaneoid
Haha aye, I tend to agree with Nietzsche a lot these days, which is worrying!
MistakeNPotatoes 20th May 2016, 7:25 PM edit delete reply
MistakeNPotatoes
Naw, just a mode of thinking. I tend to agree with a lot of his sentiments, too... but I am a fan of Lovecraft, so the pieces fit.
Bracey 26th Jul 2016, 8:07 AM edit delete reply
Almost a problem following the dialogue as you start your balloons on the top right instead of top left. Remember we read left to right. The line connecting the balloons helped me make sense of it though and even flowed nicely across the figure to the next set of balloons. A good rule of thumb is the Z formation for panels and dialogue if you weren't aware of this, as a guideline of course. The trick is knowing when and why to break the rules.

Sheer epicness art wise watching the chaos emblem become some sort of Lovecraftean monster!
Shaneoid 26th Jul 2016, 2:06 PM edit delete reply
Shaneoid
I know, I did worry about that. The issue was I had done the art before the script and so I had to place it in where it fitted. Well, you live and learn! :D
Shaneoid 6th Aug 2016, 6:48 AM edit delete reply
Shaneoid
Ok tried to fix that :)
jonathan 28th Jul 2016, 8:20 PM edit delete reply
isn't that the sign for chaos in warhammer
Shaneoid 29th Jul 2016, 1:28 AM edit delete reply
Shaneoid
No idea :/
AlpineBob 6th Aug 2016, 3:48 AM edit delete reply
You might consider putting "an" before "age" in the top panel.

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