Comic 42 - Issue #1 Page 41

19th May 2016, 9:24 PM in HOTWAB 1
Issue #1 Page 41
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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Shaneoid 8th Jul 2016, 11:04 AM edit delete

And there we have it! What a cliffhanger! Well, perhaps not. I had hoped the reveals at the end would stimulate interest, that there was a lot of fleeting scenarios which the reader thought little of, then suddenly someone was showing that there may have been some connection...


Bracey 26th Jul 2016, 9:44 AM edit delete reply
Hey its your fault that his costume looks like a Sundae! :) Nice to see another hero taking his role seriously. The Vorpal Detective, gotta say I like the name a lot, classy, feels very Brittish (which is fitting). His place reminds me of Lex Luthor's hideout in the old 1979 Superman film. A mansion under the streets of Metropolis filled with fine art and culture.

Top panel, first box should probably read either "one of Prymus City's supreme detectives" or "Prymus City's supreme detective". It falls odd the way its written in the comic.
Bracey 26th Jul 2016, 9:45 AM edit delete reply
Also ice bit with his monitor adding some needed exposition such as the name of the cult from earlier.

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