Comic 5 - Issue #4 Page 4

19th May 2016, 7:51 PM in HOTWAB 1
Issue #4 Page 4
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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Shaneoid 8th Jul 2016, 9:58 AM edit delete

Quick change of scene. I used a wire mesh to generate a warehouse but the rest is hand done. I was a little cautious of using colloquialisms for characters as sometimes they can be tough to follow for some people, but I just read that well celebrated classic, Dracula, and that scene with the old fisherman, well I couldn't hardly follow a word, so I thought, if it's good enough for Bram, it's good enough for HOTWAB :D


Bracey 26th Jul 2016, 7:48 AM edit delete reply
Nothing wrong with using whatever tools you got to achieve the desired effect. I plan on using Google Sketchup to get things like building perspective and interiors right.

I will add that I wouldn't overlap the dialogue "whats the damage anyway" with the next panel. It becomes confusing as to what I should read next. The "hmmm" works because it leads into the dialogue in the next panel, but you should have also kept the "gonna check it out" confined to the last panel as well instead of straddling the last two. That way would have added more clarity to the flow of dialogue balloons.
Shaneoid 26th Jul 2016, 2:02 PM edit delete reply
Aye in retrospect I should have moved those balloons over the art.

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