Comic 7 - Issue #1 Page 6

19th May 2016, 7:52 PM in HOTWAB 1
Issue #1 Page 6
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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Shaneoid 8th Jul 2016, 10:00 AM edit delete

Why's he dressed like a comic book hero? and what's he babbling on about?

The inclusion of Dionysus may strike a familiar chord with some people, however I ask them to sit tight, I hope to take this somewhere original with the concept.


Bracey 26th Jul 2016, 7:57 AM edit delete reply
Really love Ghostmoth's seemingly crazy rambling dialogue. In some ways it reminds me of The Crow, poetic and eerie. And I love the thugs reaction to such weird speech, just punch him, lol. On the down side where did the Irish guy come from? Thug 1 left him behind in the warehouse. Remember in comics its important to show things. Also Im digging the fact that you are doing accents and local slang for characters in this.
Shaneoid 26th Jul 2016, 2:04 PM edit delete reply
I thought about that too when I looked these pages over but I thought it was so minor a detail it wasn't worth packing in another panel.

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